完本感完言

    拖拖拉拉，终于写完了！
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    《秘战》是作者在起点的第四本书，也是第二本谍战题材小说。
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    先说说本书的不足。
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    故事的开篇就让很多人吐槽，挑两个热点问题，例如：日本四面靠海，他们怎么可能缺盐呢？天皇特使高越保死的也太容易了吧？
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    认为靠海就不缺盐的大佬们，建议背起小书包重返课堂，再接受一次九年义务教育。
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    至于历史上刺杀高越保的经过，甚至比我写的还容易。
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    ——军统特工麻克敌（明）掏出手枪冲了过去，对着高越保连开两枪，高越保重伤不治一命呜呼！
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    另外就是，不久之后，麻克敌遭叛徒出卖被捕牺牲，在书里却善始善终活的很长远。
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    我现在多少也明白了，即便是历史真实事件也要变通，读者想看的是惊心动魄爽到起飞的情节。
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    我的写法和网文有很大不同，欠缺这方面的写作经验，而军事题材本身又小众，扑街几乎是可以预料到的结果。
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    如果书友们看过作者另外三本书，你们应该或多或少能够理解，我在写作上比较注重人性描写。
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    兰晓龙先生的《我的团长我的团》，是令人叹为观止的一部军事作品，那部书（电视剧）的人物刻画，没有传统意义上的好人坏人区分，就连让人恨的牙根痒痒的唐副师座也有善良一面，或者说他的出发点从现实意义来看并无不妥。
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    作为资深“团迷”，我最开始的写作风格深受兰晓龙先生影响，写的第一部作品《反攻日》也是向团长致敬的一本书，虽然我写的糟糕透顶，尤其是大结局。。（捂脸）
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    那也没办法，主要是成绩太烂了，只好匆匆结束另开新书。
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    额，好像跑题了。。
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    再回来说秘战，本书最最挨骂的人物设定，非童大小姐莫属，据我所知很多很多读者因此弃书。
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    怎么说呢，设计童潼这个人物的时候，本意是为了制造矛盾冲突，要不然猪脚事事顺利就失去了悬念。
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    然而，事与愿违，书评区针对童潼的讨论，几乎是一边倒的负面评论。。
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    总而言之，还是我写的不够好，很多情节设计欠考虑。
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    上一本《暗枪》结局惨烈，很多读者希望这本是大团圆结局。
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    大团圆如约而至，是不是又觉得平淡了一点？
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    另外，说一下新书的事情。
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    很快就会发新书，预计七月上旬吧，如果大家还想看作者的书，先不要急着删除书架，发书的时候我会在这里开单章。
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    就这样吧，没啥好说的了，感谢书友们一路陪伴，谢谢你们！
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    沉默似铁
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    於2020年6月26日