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    完本了。
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    就……就挺突然的。
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    好吧,我也知道,完本得的确有些仓促,大家轻喷。
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    但这个结局,其实不算突兀。
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    因为从这本书刚开始发书,写第一个情节的时候,白袍就已经把结尾剧情想好。
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    ‘犼’现身,也就是本书完结的时候。
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    因为到这时候,所有该填的坑,就基本填完了。
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    大家仔细想想,故事的开始于任家镇、任家血脉、幕后凶手,到最后一章大结局,凶手才显露出来,这是不是有点‘首尾呼应’的感jio?
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    这就是本书最重要的一条主线了。
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    当然,还有另外一条主线,那就是主角的父亲张玄这条线。
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    两条主线,最后都已经交汇到了一起,所有的谜底全部揭开!
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    你们说,是不是到了完本的时候?
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    虽然这本书的写作过程中,更改了几次情节、遭遇了几次变故,但整体的大纲,还是一直在框架内,并没有翻车。
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    总体来说,这个结局或许略显仓促,但是绝不突兀。
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    反而如果再写下去,主线写完了,谜底解开了,后续的剧情不管怎么写,都不会有太大的吸引力。
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    继续写,差不多就等于水文。
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    即便后续写《僵约》的剧情,或许还有大几十万字可写,但同样也是水文。
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    本来我设定的大纲里,对于《僵约》的剧情就是点到即止,稍微提一下,不会作为主线来写。
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    一来僵约剧情虽然精彩,但自身体系混乱,很容易崩;二来主角目前实力达到了这种层次后,也无法融入《僵约》中。
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    毕竟主角在灭掉犼之后,差不多已经达到了天道级别的存在。
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    勉强写,也是寡淡如水。
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    除非《僵约》的剧情,以张敬的儿子‘张守真’作为主角切入,小张公子搅动僵约风云,倒是还可以写写……(本身天赋足够妖孽,还有个天道一般的老爸作为靠山,什么天师府、十万大山诸多妖王、毛家后人、蜀山剑派,都可以随便乱逛。再把马叮当、马小玲、山本一夫、况天佑什么的串联起来。我擦,莫名感觉这题材蛮有看点!)
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    不过如果真的要写,那也是第二部了,不再属于这本书。
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    ……
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    话说回来。
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    这本书白袍最羞愧、对不住大家的地方,是后期的更新。
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    导致后期更新变成一更党,甚至断更的原因,主要有两个方面。
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    一个是这本书前面部分,其实算是‘无限流’,根据电影剧情走,我只需要想办法将所有电影巧妙的融合起来就行了,所以写得轻松很快,日更万字也不难。
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    而到了后期,特别是主角离开甘田镇犼,津门大比、白素贞和兰若寺结合、十万大山、僵尸四大先祖等等,基本就是原创剧情了。
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    两者之间转换,写作方法改变,速度一下就变慢了很多。
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    另一个,则是白袍经验欠缺,作为一个‘老太监’选手,完本经验严重不足。
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    师叔这本书写了两百多万字,没有蹦,真是白袍的第一次了。所以后期克制住了太监的惯性,坚持写完,也是蛮不容易。
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    不过,这本书坚持写完,对于白袍也算是一个很大的提升,在写作上总结了不少经验,为下本书打下了一个良好的基础。
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    新书已经想好了题材,也写好了开头,估计还要再改改。
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    发书时间不定,或许下周就发了,或许要等十天半个月。
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    至于这期间,如果大家想看《师叔》这本书的后记番外什么的,大家可以留言。
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    如果大家要求热烈,白袍或许会写几章,就以‘小张公子’张守真的角度来写。
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    毕竟最后结尾部分,留白还挺大的……
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    ……
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    ……
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    ……
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    最后再一次,完结撒花!
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