，决定了，本书到此结束

    如题，今天下午在群里和书友们聊了聊，关于本书主角的人设，剧情背景之类的，感触颇深。
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    笔力不足，不足以把控住一个类似于王道热血漫男主的主角，甚至于人设都与大背景有种割裂感、违和感。
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    这就是我这本书到目前为止最致命的问题——主角的人设在大背景下立不起来。
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    而过分刻意的去描写刻画又有种画虎不成反类犬的感觉，我想，这应该也是为什么本书成绩这么差的原因。
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    所以，我决定这本书暂时就到此为止了。二三十的追读，何必要继续头铁下去，到时候让自己难堪呢（苦笑）
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    至于之后是否还写新书，我也不确定，不过在书友群里聊的时候确实有几个思路。
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    等我忙完这一阵，充充电，可能会重新回来写吧。
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    如果确定要在点娘开新书，我还是会用这个账号发。
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    一是我懒得开马甲，不然每次用app看书回应书评区的问题都要切号，麻烦；
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    二是，我喜欢旧梦四张机这个笔名。
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    最后，向一直在支持我的人说一声：抱歉。
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    抱歉，辜负了你们的期待。